I loved this short story. It was interesting. I’m stuck between wishing it was longer and thinking it was the perfect length. It had an amazing amount of detail. It was just enough to drag me in and spit me back out. I loved the way the author went about telling this story. There was no chapters it was just one long, to-the-point, short story. The supernatural addition to the story really helped bring me in. I am super impressed by how much I liked this story and how well it was presented.